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One of the best overall Newgrounds parodies ever

Given the length, extent of voice acting, and music/sound effects used, I'm amazed this flash was only 5 MB. The action scenes were also very well animated. I'm surprised the score isn't higher

RSQViper responds:

I am surprised at all the same things you are to be honest.

Although I think the length hurt it more than helped, but I was glad to finish it and we were both very happy that it came out the way it did.

Thanks, man!

Nothing we havn't seen before

With the long introduction, I expected this to be a deep and compelling animation, but it ended up just being one of the dozens of stick figure fighting flashes. In the future, make sure your animation is at least twice as long as your intro, not half like it was here.

Sound was alright, I myself didn't like the music much, but the fighting effects were right on

The animations was the saving grace of this flash, so I did vote to protect. explosions are well done, and so on. the explosion animation though for your opening credits was clearly the explosion tool in flash. If you are going to use that, as I have in my flashes, you should at least have some sort of boom noise, and speed it up, they take way too long

Other notes, the file size is way too big for this short and simplistic of an animation. Either compress the sound, or if you have done so, use the mp3 trim program that Tom Fulp recomends in his audio optization page. that way, you won't be pushing 4 and a half megs. this could have easily been 1mb or less.
Overall, not too bad, but there is definately room for improvement.

Joeseye responds:

Yes I am aware of these this problems...Hust didn't think it would matter that much because to amount of corrections I would of have to do would talke way to long. I also didn't mean for it to be that short, it just got to the point with the rocket and I thought this is a good way to end...

Mario... and Pirates?

ZOMFG, AWZOME!!!!111

electricamish responds:

lol wtf lol

First part really cool, second... meh

I really enjoyed the live action fight sequence that was spliced with flash animation, but as for the actual animate part, I thought it was a tad bland and pointless. I'd stick with what you did right on the live action and attempt to improve your actual animations a bit more before making a new flash for newgrounds. However, thanks to your fight sequence, this one is good enought to pass judgement, at least in my eyes.

DaBigCow responds:

thanx i like the fight sequence better to, the animation we just threw in there because we thought it was kinda funny

I actually kind of liked it

It had great graphics, I just hope to see some action next time and possibly some spoken dialogue

under-dawg responds:

don't worry man there will be more action on the next.

It was a good idea

I'd develop the animation a little more, and, no offence, but I can't stand when the voice acting is blatantly a kid. Get an adult to do the voices, and it will be better.

MittT responds:

No offence taken at all. I know, that the little kid voices are... yeah...
but its not like its my fault. ;)

Pretty clever

I vote the black stick to win!!

blood-leach responds:

thx yup the black guys gonna win at this rate

Don't listen to those no talents hick bitches

That was very interesting, anyone who says other wise is an emo mother fucker!

01sfisher responds:

exacly man

I'm what you would call a bit of a slacker. After about two years, I've finally decided to take up flash again. I know it's not the best stuff on the portal, but give it some time and I think we'll see some really amazing stuff.

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