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The Most Influential flash animation of all time

the sheer simplicity and genious of this artistic achievement are enough to make me want to weep uncontrollably. StrawberryClock is the king of the portal

A Good Effort

Some syncing issues and what not, but the humor is there definately. I'm going to guess that This was inspired by BIgfoots Super Mario Land flashes.

Nothing we havn't seen before

With the long introduction, I expected this to be a deep and compelling animation, but it ended up just being one of the dozens of stick figure fighting flashes. In the future, make sure your animation is at least twice as long as your intro, not half like it was here.

Sound was alright, I myself didn't like the music much, but the fighting effects were right on

The animations was the saving grace of this flash, so I did vote to protect. explosions are well done, and so on. the explosion animation though for your opening credits was clearly the explosion tool in flash. If you are going to use that, as I have in my flashes, you should at least have some sort of boom noise, and speed it up, they take way too long

Other notes, the file size is way too big for this short and simplistic of an animation. Either compress the sound, or if you have done so, use the mp3 trim program that Tom Fulp recomends in his audio optization page. that way, you won't be pushing 4 and a half megs. this could have easily been 1mb or less.
Overall, not too bad, but there is definately room for improvement.

Joeseye responds:

Yes I am aware of these this problems...Hust didn't think it would matter that much because to amount of corrections I would of have to do would talke way to long. I also didn't mean for it to be that short, it just got to the point with the rocket and I thought this is a good way to end...

This series is genius

It's simplistic design combined with well thought out dialogue make this one of my favorite series on Newgrounds. Its no wonder this hasn't gone unnoticed (so many toof parodies in the last few days its not even funny). I love the commentary and the logo replies section. I just had one question.
Is each toof character its own individual symbol, or do you just impose the face parts onto the existing teef in the background?

Mario... and Pirates?

ZOMFG, AWZOME!!!!111

electricamish responds:

lol wtf lol

Not bad at all for a first attempt

work on graphics and sound, but I'm possitive this will pass submission. also, work on the models a bit more, but otherwise, this was very good for a first attempt. Hope your future flashing goes well

First part really cool, second... meh

I really enjoyed the live action fight sequence that was spliced with flash animation, but as for the actual animate part, I thought it was a tad bland and pointless. I'd stick with what you did right on the live action and attempt to improve your actual animations a bit more before making a new flash for newgrounds. However, thanks to your fight sequence, this one is good enought to pass judgement, at least in my eyes.

DaBigCow responds:

thanx i like the fight sequence better to, the animation we just threw in there because we thought it was kinda funny

You reviewed mine, so I'll do yours

I liked this flash quite a bit, and I see we share a simmiler idea on Mario's opinions of Sony. I really enjoyed the waterboy sound effects too, and nice style for the whole thing. If you ever feel like doing a joint project on something, I think that would be good. Wish you luck in your future spriting!

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Another good clock flash

I like alot of your clock work, crust clock. I know you said it will never happen, but please make the sequal to Strawberrry's gym, it would be excellent for clock day 06. Keep up the good clock work, and continue to show the world why straberry clock is king of teh portal. B

P.S.
B

I'm what you would call a bit of a slacker. After about two years, I've finally decided to take up flash again. I know it's not the best stuff on the portal, but give it some time and I think we'll see some really amazing stuff.

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